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  Death of an Old Man

A little man in town died two days ago. I don’t know his name but he and his wife had a son who runs a business in the next town. I had seen them in the store last week, the little man moving slowly, not out of care or doubt but due to the fact that he could not move any faster. He was perhaps in his early seventies with a thin, dull face and slow eyes. He slouched forward noticeably at the shoulders as if from the effort of having to move. His wife took from his hands a package of beef jerky which he had picked up to purchase and put it back on the rack. “You don’t want this,” she announced, and they proceeded to check out. She had newly coifed, curly white hair and a round face carved with lines. Her face was like much of the American West, covered with dry washes everywhere, arid, monochrome, a hint of meanness lurking in her pale eyes.

As we were headed for my truck, my companion commented about the old man. “He looks like he’s about to cash it in,” my friend said. Less than a week later, the old man was dead.

Now, in the mornings when I walk past the old man’s house, I’ll think of him trying to buy that beef jerky. Perhaps it would have been his last pleasure before leaving this earth. A little beef jerky doesn’t seem like too much to want. His tastes were simple, manly, unobtrusive, a small measure of satisfaction for a life well lived, despite his wife.


posted on July 20, 2008 7:32 PM ()

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That's so sad. For him to be only in his early 70's and to look sooo old, I wonder if his wife had something to do with his advanced aging... refusing him of all his simple pleasures in life.
comment by mellowdee on July 23, 2008 2:50 PM ()
I guess the term "henpecked" originated in a rural setting.
reply by looserobes on July 23, 2008 7:29 PM ()
Are you beginning a book? This is simply beautiful description.
comment by drmaus on July 23, 2008 12:08 PM ()
Thanks. I've finished three; they're excellent dust gatherers.
reply by looserobes on July 23, 2008 7:28 PM ()
The nurse in me says maybe he had Parkinson's Disease and the beef jerky would have posed a threat when trying to swallow. The Daddy's Girl in me says buy the damn jerky. Thanks for sharing this story.
comment by mzscarlett on July 22, 2008 8:03 PM ()
You want to be careful not to over-analyze these things...
reply by looserobes on July 23, 2008 7:32 PM ()
makes me wish you had been able to sneak him a beef jerky( behind her back)... the simple things we take for granted.
comment by cindy on July 22, 2008 4:34 PM ()
I don't take the simple things for granted. In fact...they're my favorite things!
reply by looserobes on July 22, 2008 6:54 PM ()
How sad..
comment by elfie33 on July 22, 2008 7:36 AM ()
That was a touching story. Just reinforces my belief that you should enjoy every minute that you live even if your pleasure is beef jerky.
comment by elderjane on July 21, 2008 4:30 PM ()
You are exactly right.
reply by looserobes on July 23, 2008 7:31 PM ()
It's sad when people don't get to "live their bliss", as Joe Campbell used to say.... even if one's bliss is a bag of jerky at checkout time. Hopefully he had the more important experiences. But after reading your description of his ole lady, I have to wonder.
comment by jjoohhnn on July 20, 2008 8:03 PM ()
I've heard the wife described as one of those "mean as a snake" type people, so the poor l'il guy probably needed some relief.
reply by looserobes on July 21, 2008 7:50 AM ()
There are people who fill their empty lives with the suffering they cause others. They rejoice in bank foreclosures and body bags filled with other peoples sons.
reply by bumpedoff on July 21, 2008 2:22 AM ()

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