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Life & Events > For Fredo and Anyone Else - a Little Poetry

  For Fredo and Anyone Else - a Little Poetry

Fredo said I should post some poetry. I've had poetry published in 9 or 10 anthologies over the years and have also been published in Europe. I have sort of an odd, off-beat style. This is one that I wrote back in 2004, when I wasn't feeling that great about being middle aged. Now, I'm fine with it.Anyway, Here's a sample.

The Invisible Woman

Forty five, slightly plump, zoftig in
that "I'm a mom" way.
In the line at the airport, never singled
Out. "She looks like Aunt Betty,"
the security guard whispers to the cop.
No threat there. Anonymous.
Unsexual. Alone and alone again.
She asks the young man if the seat is taken.
He barely glances and nods his no.
She sits facing the runway, watching
the pretty young thing in her tight jeans
and stilletto's ask the young man for
The other seat.
He smiles warmly and moves his briefcase.
The woman watches. She remembers when.
The blue eyes are still the same, but
no one sees the loneliness that hides there.
She remains until they call her seat.
Invisible.


Copyright ©2004 DSG


posted on May 17, 2008 8:22 AM ()

Comments:

There's more to you than meets the eye, Great post
comment by lynnie on May 17, 2008 4:05 PM ()
reply by teacherwoman on May 17, 2008 4:10 PM ()
I like the style!
comment by greatmartin on May 17, 2008 10:14 AM ()
Thanks martin. I do appreciate that especially from you.
reply by teacherwoman on May 17, 2008 4:11 PM ()
Bravo! Deb, superb
comment by augusta on May 17, 2008 9:06 AM ()
Thanks.
reply by teacherwoman on May 17, 2008 9:59 AM ()
very nice and you been keeping your hidden talent from us.
You are full of surprised.
comment by fredo on May 17, 2008 8:48 AM ()
I've posted a few here and there.
reply by teacherwoman on May 17, 2008 9:59 AM ()

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